Sunday, February 19, 2012

Swimming Writing

On Friday we wrote about our swimming experiences at Ally Todd Pool. We are learning to start our story in an exciting way. Here are a few stories that we want to share;

I splash in the water. My togs get wet and the water jumps up with a splash. (Keelan P.)

Splash! The water went up like a fountain. I can hear bubbles in the water. (Bede)

Splash! Splosh! I can hunt for treasure. I can hear the waves. (Baxter)

The water splashed in my face. It got in my eyes. I didn't like it, it hurt so much. The water was wavy. I liked it so much. (Ariana)

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