Our Awesome Writing - 15/05/2011

Today we started with writing about our weekend. We are learning to use describing words and add more detail to make our writing more exciting. We also talked about how changing the start of our story can make it more interesting to read. Have a look at some great weekend adventures below:

I had a very nice weekend because I played soccer and my team won and my team was Brazil and I got two goals. - Riley

On Saturday I went to my Nana and Poppa's and I went to the park. At night I went in my Nana and Poppa's spa pool. There were lights everywhere and there were jets. - Brooke C.

On Sunday morning I was nagging for play station, Mum and Dad said No! We said "Oh man." so we played Lego land then they let me. - Alexander

What an awesome weekend! On Saturday I went to my friends house. I also made a slot car set all by myself. - Chester